Tomorrow!

2013-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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School starts tomorrow! Oh my god!,,,, Now I'll go to the middle school! I will study hard and get a lot of stress,, I'm good at art. But there aren't art contest. And I'm not goodat math. But there are many math contest. Oh,,, I want to get good mark!

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah!!

It\'s Monday again!^^

Thank you for sharing this one to me.

I know you can do it!!

Just do your best, okay?

Good luck!

See you later!

~~T. Heidi _^-^_

School starts tomorrow!

>>Correct!!
Oh my god!,,,,

>>Correct!!
Now I\'ll go to the middle school!

>>Now, I\'ll be in middle school.
I will study hard and get a lot of stress,,

>>Correct!! [please don\'t be stressed....^^kkk...]

Or >> I will study hard and get stressed.

I\'m good at art.

>>Correct!!
But there aren\'t art contest.

>>But there aren\'t any art contest here.
And I\'m not goodat math.

>>And I\'m not good at math.
But there are many math contest.

>>But there are a lot of math contest.
Oh,,, I want to get good mark!

>>Oh... I want to get a good mark!

>>OR I want to get a high grade!^^

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