Tomorrow
학생이 쓴 원문
As I told you, I have a drinking party tomorrow again.
Tomorrow is the meeting for freshmen and sophomore so I have to go there and I have to stay up all night. So I can't attend the class. Sorry.
Because of the new school term, I am very busy. Especially this week.
Oh! There is an intramural athletic meet in April. As a result we have to exercise in the every morning until the athletic meet is finished.
Nowadays I am very busy but I'm so happy. Because I can meet many friends and I have a chance to make new friends.
See you the day after tomorrow :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I’m so excited about this new chapter of you life. Keep going and enjoy it. This is a nice exposure for you and it will be very helpful in the future.
See you in class tomorrow.
Stay safe,
T. Connie
As I told you, I have a drinking party tomorrow again.
>> CorrectTomorrow is the meeting for freshmen and sophomore so I have to go there and I have to stay up all night.
>> Correct
>> Tomorrow, freshmen and sophomore so I have to be there all night.
So I can't attend the class. Sorry.
>> CorrectBecause of the new school term, I am very busy. Especially this week.
>> Since it is the beginning of the school term, I am so busy specially for this week.Oh! There is an intramural athletic meet in April.
>> Correct
As a result we have to exercise in the every morning until the athletic meet is finished.
>> Correct.Nowadays I am very busy but I'm so happy. Because I can meet many friends and I have a chance to make new friends.
>> CorrectSee you the day after tomorrow :)
>> Correct
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