Tomorrow

2010-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

As I told you, I have a drinking party tomorrow again. Tomorrow is the meeting for freshmen and sophomore so I have to go there and I have to stay up all night. So I can't attend the class. Sorry. Because of the new school term, I am very busy. Especially this week. Oh! There is an intramural athletic meet in April. As a result we have to exercise in the every morning until the athletic meet is finished. Nowadays I am very busy but I'm so happy. Because I can meet many friends and I have a chance to make new friends. See you the day after tomorrow :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], I’m so excited about this new chapter of you life. Keep going and enjoy it. This is a nice exposure for you and it will be very helpful in the future. See you in class tomorrow. Stay safe, T. Connie As I told you, I have a drinking party tomorrow again. >> CorrectTomorrow is the meeting for freshmen and sophomore so I have to go there and I have to stay up all night. >> Correct >> Tomorrow, freshmen and sophomore so I have to be there all night. So I can't attend the class. Sorry. >> CorrectBecause of the new school term, I am very busy. Especially this week. >> Since it is the beginning of the school term, I am so busy specially for this week.Oh! There is an intramural athletic meet in April. >> Correct As a result we have to exercise in the every morning until the athletic meet is finished. >> Correct.Nowadays I am very busy but I'm so happy. Because I can meet many friends and I have a chance to make new friends. >> CorrectSee you the day after tomorrow :) >> Correct

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