Tonado

2012-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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The experts had ever thought that the velocity of tornado is greater than 500 miles per hour. However, according to recent research, it is rare that the wind speed is larger than 200 mile s per hour.The speed of tornado is commonly less than 112 miles per hour. The tonado is relatively small scale. The width of averaged tonado is from 400 feets to 500 feets and move 4 to 5 miles on earth and lives for several munitues. The tonado with width of 1 mile is unprecedentedly very huge. It can be survive for greater than 1 hour. But such a tonado is very rare.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing your composition and your ideas about tornado! You did a good job! Keep it up! Here are your corrections: T. Nica The experts had ever thought that the velocity of tornado is greater than 500 miles per hour. >>CORRECT However, according to recent research, it is rare that the wind speed is larger than 200 mile s per hour. >>CORRECT The speed of tornado is commonly less than 112 miles per hour. >>CORRECT The tonado is relatively small scale. >>CORRECT The width of averaged tonado is from 400 feets to 500 feets and move 4 to 5 miles on earth and lives for several munitues. >>The average width of a tornado is from 400 feet to 500 feet and moves from  4 to 5 miles on earth and lives for several munitues. The tonado with width of 1 mile is unprecedentedly very huge. >>CORRECT [tornado with an R] It can be survive for greater than 1 hour. But such a tonado is very rare. >>It can survive for greater than 1 hour. But such tornado is very rare.  

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