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2012-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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HOMEWORK: Decided whether to use the definte article >the< or not. If you do not need the article >the<, type an x. Hi John, I arrived in _the_ USA last Monday. We left __X__ Rome, flew over _The_ Alps and made a quick stop in _The_ London. There we went shopping in _The_ Harrods, visited __X__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in _The_ Hyde Park. On the following day we left for __X__ New York. __X__ time on board wasn't boring as there were two films to watch on _The_ monitor. _The_ people on _____ plane were all _____ Italian. Before we landed at _The_ JFK airport, we saw _____ Statue of Liberty, _The_ Ellis Island and _The_ Empire State Building. hotel I stayed in was on _X__ corner of __X__ 42nd Street and __X__ 5th Avenue. I don't like _the_ hotels very much, but I didn't have _____ time to rent an apartment. Please say hello to Peter and Mandy. Yours, [이름] --------- I don't know why I used The. Following my feeling, I fiIl in the balnk.

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Hello Su [이름]! Thank you for doing the homework, even though you thought it was difficult. At least you\'ve tried, just don\'t forget to review the corrections that I\'ve made. Take care! Teacher Michelle HOMEWORK:Decide whether to use the definte article >the< or not. If you do not need the article >the<, type an x. Hi John,I arrived in _the_ USA last Monday. >> Correct! We left __X__ Rome, flew over _The_ Alps and made a quick stop in _The_ London. >> We left x Rome, flew over the Alps and made a quick stop in x London. There we went shopping in _The_ Harrods, visited __X__Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in _The_ Hyde Park. >> There we went shopping in x Harrods, visited the Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in x Hyde Park. On the following day we left for __X__ New York. >> Correct! __X__ time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on _The_ monitor. >> The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor. _The_ people on _____ plane were all _____ Italian. >> The people on the plane were all x Italian. Before we landed at _The_ JFK airport, we saw _____ Statue of Liberty, _The_ Ellis Island and _The_ Empire State Building. >> Before we landed at x JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, x Ellis Island and the Empire State Building. hotel I stayed in was on _X__ corner of __X__ 42nd Street and __X__ 5th Avenue. >> The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of x 42nd Street and x 5th Avenue. I don\'t like _the_ hotels very much, but I didn\'t have _____ time to rent an apartment. >> I don\'t like x hotels very much, but I didn\'t have x time to rent an apartment.Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.Yours,Peter ---------I don\'t know why I used The. Following my feeling, I fiIl in the balnk. >> I don\'t know why I used THE. I just followed my feelings, then filled in the blanks.

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