Too much emphasis is placed on testing these days. The need to prepare for tests and examinations is

2020-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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Everyone knows that the test is not the best way to evaluate students but we still don\'t know what can be alternative of the test. I think that teachers and professionals in education field have tried to change the evaluation method and they tried to implement different methods at schools. I can\'t say that if it was successful but I am sure that the test is one of the good evaluation standard because we still have it around our country. Students in Korea have to study a lot more than other countries because their life can be changed according to the result of entrance exam for university. As a result, parents want their children to study hard. Many children study various subject even before entering school. Some parents push babies to study English since they were born. University entrance exam cause a lot of social problem such as suicide of student. I think that education officials as well as parents have to try to find another way to evaluate students instead of current method.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]~! Keep up t he good work! Have a nice day today!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA 
Everyone knows that the test is not the best way to evaluate students but we still don\'t know what can be alternative of the test. 
>>> Everyone knows that the test is not the best way to evaluate students but we still don\'t know what can be other test alternatives.
I think that teachers and professionals in education field have tried to change the evaluation method and they tried to implement different methods at schools.
>>> CORRECT
 I can\'t say that if it was successful but I am sure that the test is one of the good evaluation standards because we still have it around our country.
>>> CORRECT
 Students in Korea have to study a lot more than other countries because their life can be changed according to the result of entrance exam for university.
>>> CORRECT
 As a result, parents want their children to study hard. 
>>> CORRECT
Many children study various subjects even before entering school. 
>>> CORRECT
Some parents push their babies to study English since they were born.
>>> CORRECT
 University entrance exam cause a lot of social problem such as suicide of students. 
>>> CORRECT
I think that education officials as well as parents have to try to find another way to evaluate students instead of current method.
>>> CORRECT

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