Too much emphasis on personal apperance.

Nowadays, many people put too much emphasis on their appearance. I'm just worried for them to lose or neglect thier inner beauty. I belive beauty consists of inner and outer beauty and they should be well balanced each other. Some of my friends took a plastic surgery. I'm not that I oppose the surgery but worring that they get addicted to the surgery. It is easy for them to have an artificial face and that will worsen their inner minds. That's why some people have a social phobia after taking the surgery. The other reason is it is likely that someone who take the surgery will ignore common men because she think she deserve to meet someone who is better than she and financially. Anyhow, I'm satisfied with my appearance and I'm trying to fill my mind with good things.

Hello [이름]!I  appreciate your effort in making compositions!  I guess you are getting better and I like the things that you discuss in your writings. Moreover you’re right, we should be contented on what we have! Other people get into surgeries because they don’t feel contented with what they look. They should just be happy with what they have because inner beauty is much more important than the outer beauty. Anyway, I’m very satisfied with everything. I never thought of having a surgery even if somebody sponsors for me. I guess I just have to live for the best and love the people around me who love me in return. Kikiki!!!! Furthermore, I’m  happy that we’re not one of then. Let’s just live life to the fullest and make sure that we won’t regret in the future with what we are doing now. See you on Thursday! Have a good day ahead and keep safe! ^_^ T. Abby   Too much emphasis on personal apperance. >> correct >> Too much emphasis on personal appearance. (be careful of the spelling) Nowadays, many people put too much emphasis on their appearance. >> correctI'm just worried for them to lose or neglect thier inner beauty. >> I just worry about them losing or neglecting their inner beauties already.I belive beauty consists of inner and outer beauty and they should be well balanced each other. >> I believe that beauty is inside and out of a person so he/she should balance both. >> I believe that beauty is from inside and out or a person so these both must be well-balanced.Some of my friends took a plastic surgery. >> correct >> Some of my friends had a plastic surgery. I'm not that I oppose the surgery but worring that they get addicted to the surgery. >> It’s not that I oppose surgery but I worry that they  might get used of having a surgery already. >> I’m not opposing surgeries but I worry about them being addicted to surgeries already.It is easy for them to have an artificial face and that will worsen their inner minds. >> It is easy for them to have a surgery but will surely worsen their inner  minds. >> It’s easy to have a surgery for them but this will surely worsen their thoughts. That's why some people have a social phobia after taking the surgery. >> That’s why some people have social phobias after taking a surgery.The other reason is it is likely that someone who take the surgery will ignore common men because she think she deserve to meet someone who is better than she and financially. >> The reason for this is that some people after having the surgery would just ignore the common people around them because they think that they deserve those who are more handsome/pretty as well as financially stable in life.Anyhow, I'm satisfied with my appearance and I'm trying to fill my mind with good things. >> correct >> Anyhow, I’m satisfied with my appearance and I always try to fill my thoughts with good things.