Top of job in the world
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Athlete and Game Developers.
Most of them have made their dreams come true.
It\'s hard to survive the competition but They have earned lots of moneys.
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What do you think are the top two jobs in the world? Why?
I think Athlete and Game Developers.
>> I think being an athlete and game developer is the best.
Most of them have made their dreams come true.
>> CORRECT~~
It\'s hard to survive the competition but They have earned lots of moneys.
>> It\'s hard to survive the competition but They have earned lots of money.
>> OR: Their industries are very competitive, however, they still manage to earn and save a fortune.
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