Topic 2
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강사 첨삭
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I\'ve known about your comapny for quite soem time now.
>>I\'ve known about your company for quite some time now.
Luckily, i came across an online annoncement regarding this job.
>>Luckily, I came across an online announcement regarding this job.
Since i\'ve been hoping to work for your company for a long time, it was an opportunity that i couldnt just pass up.
>>Since I\'ve been hoping to work for your company for a long time, it was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up.
or Since i\'ve been hoping to work for environmental engineering field for a long time, it was an opportunity that i couldnt just pass up.
>>Since I\'ve been hoping to work in the field of environmental engineering for a long time, it was an opportunity that I couldn\'t just pass up.
Also, it was an opportunity that is rare for me to show how effective person am i to your company.
>>Also, it was an opportunity that is rare for me to show how effective I am to your company.
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