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Hello [이름]! This composition you made tells so much about you. I am sure that it will sound great when you give this answer in a future job interview. Great work! ~~T.Dee

As i said earlier, my major is Environmental Engineerig.

>>As I\'ve said earlier, my major is Environmental Engineering.

I took it up at the KOREAN MARINETIME AND OCEAN UNIVERSITY in BUSAN and it took me for aobut 5 years to complete my degree.

>>I took it up at the Korean Maritime and Ocean University in Busan and it took me for about  5 years to complete my degree.

Actually when i chose my major, i didnt know that what i want be so my fater recommeded for me to take up Engineer because it is good choice to build my carrer in the future. 

>>Actually, when I chose my major, I didn\'t know what I want be so my father recommended for me to take up an engineering course because it is a good  choice to build my career in the future. 
 Also, i\'ve been passionate about the quality of life that people with live in.

 >>Also, I\'ve been passionate about the quality of life of people and the environment.

That\'s why i chose my major for Environmental Engineering.

>>That\'s why I chose my major which is Environmental Engineering.
 When i was taking my major, i realized that Keeping a good environment for people to live in is a major goal for me. 

 >>When I was taking my major, I realized that keeping a good environment for people to live is my top priority.
 During the university, i had my on the job training at BECO which is government office and i learned about managint doucements and handling equipment needed for my research.

>>While completing my degree, I had my on-the-job training at BECO which is a government office and, from it, I learned about managing documents and handling equipment needed for my research.

After that job training, i got 2 license which allows me to make analysis of atmosphere envrinmental and water quality environmental. 

>>After that job training, I got 2 licenses which qualifies me to make some analysis related to the environments\' atmosphere and water quality.
It was not easy to finish my degree, but i I was able to with my patience.

>>It was not easy to finish my degree, but I was able to do it with my patience.