Topic: Basic Modals Exercise and short essay

2019-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Joylin

학생이 쓴 원문

1. This _____ be dangerous if you don\'t have the right equipment. a) should b) can --> (b) can 2. You ________ yell at your parents. It\'s not nice. a) shouldn\'t b) can\'t --> (b) can\'t 3. I ________ have seen that movie eight times. a) must b) can -> (a) must 4. I can\'t allow you to hang around here. = I ________ have you hanging around here. a) shouldn\'t b) can\'t --> b) can\'t 5. P1: Isn\'t that Charlie\'s umbrella? P2: Yes, he ________ have left it here yesterday. a) should b) must --> b) must It is not easy to take the class in the morning because I have some dinner appointments twice or more than a week. I had no choice but to drink alcohol and it make me difficult to get up. Furthermore , I often feel uncomfortable to speak English earily due to my hang-over. So, I can consider shifting my class in the evening from next month. However, I might miss my class often due to my compnay gatherings. It is always an unsloved dilema for me :- )

강사 첨삭

Hi YJ!
Great Monday!
Family is the best inspiration to work even harder this week.
Let your week full of accomplishments as you inspire others.
Anyway, I had a review of your homework about Basic Modals and you had a great improvement.
I hope that you understand well about the correct usage of \'should\', \'must\', and \'can\'.
Here are my corrections.
1. b
>> Correct!
2. b
>> Incorrect!
>> \'Should\' is the correct answer here. 
3. a 
>> Correct!
4. b 
>> Correct!
5. b
>> Correct!
Your essay.
It is not easy to take the class in the morning because I have some dinner appointments twice or more than a week.
>> It is not easy to take the class in the morning because I have some dinner appointments twice or even everyday of the week.
I had no choice but to drink alcohol and it make me difficult to get up.
>> I had no choice but to drink alcohol and it makes me difficult to get up.
Furthermore , I often feel uncomfortable to speak English earily due to my hang-over.
>> Furthermore, I often feel uncomfortable to speak English easily due to my hang-over.
So, I can consider shifting my class in the evening from next month.
>> Correct!
However, I might miss my class often due to my compnay gatherings. 
>> However, I might miss my class often due to my company gatherings. 
It is always an unsloved dilema for me
>> It is always an unsolved dilemma for me. 
Here\'s my response.
Be careful on your spelling whenever you write sentences. 
Regarding on your idea of moving your schedule, our Korean manager will always be there to help you just in case you decided to change it.
You can think about it over again. 
Thank you Sir YJ. Enjoy your day!


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