Topic: hobby (preparing for the conversation final exam in my school) -1

MY hobby is taking a walk. A places where I stroll are Hangang and Children's grand park. The reason why I like walking is that it is a simple exercise, I can have a fresh atmosphere in the nature, and I can lose my weight. I began to start walking because I wanted to lose my weight. Last november my weight was 102kg. But After I started to walk, my weight became 85kg. The effect was incredible. The distance when I walk in one time is 4 to 5km. After I walk I feel refreshed and gain a power to restart my work. Now, it is a summer. When it was spring, I could walk in any hour as the whether was neither cold nor hot. And now it is hot at noon, I could only walk in the morning or late afternoon. Walking also helped me adopt myself to basketball club training. I'm the member of the university basketball club. Actually I can't do basketball well. So I'm not the main player in the team. The practice course is running and playing basketball. (continued...)

Hi there! How was your weekend? I hope you had a wonderful one. It\'s good to know that you are having your daily exercise. That is really good to your health. Keep up the good habit. I\'ll talk to you later! See you! ^^T..Sheela^.. Here are my corrections for you: MY hobby is taking a walk. >>My hobby is walking. A places where I stroll are Hangang and Children\'s grand park. >>The places where I stroll are Hangang and Children\'s park. The reason why I like walking is that it is a simple exercise, >>The reason I like walking is because it is a simple exercise. I can have a fresh atmosphere in the nature, and I can lose my weight. >>I can smell the  fresh air from nature and I can lose my weight. I began to start walking because I wanted to lose my weight. >>CORRECT Last november my weight was 102kg. >>Last November, my weight was 102 kg. But After I started to walk, my weight became 85kg. >>But after I started walking, my weight reduced to 85 kg. The effect was incredible. >>CORRECT The distance when I walk in one time is 4 to 5km. >>The distance that I walked the last time was 4-5 km. After I walk I feel refreshed and gain a power to restart my work. >>After I walked, I feel refreshed and powerful to start my work. Now, it is a summer.When it was spring, I could walk in any hour as the whether was neither cold nor hot.  >> During Spring, I could walk anytime whether it is cold or hot. And now it is hot at noon, I could only walk in the morning or late afternoon. >>But now that is is hot at noon, I can only walk in the morning or late in the afternoon. Walking also helped me adopt myself to basketball club training. >>CORRECT I\'m the member of the university basketball club. >>I\'m a member of the university basketball club. Actually I can\'t do basketball well. >>CORRECT So I\'m not the main player in the team. >>CORRECT The practice course is running and playing basketball. >>CORRECT (continued...) >>to be continued