toughest problem
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There were many tough proble[이름]
One of the toughest things is when my sons were sick.
When my children were sick, I couldn\'t do anything for kids, but watching.
I wanted to replace them with me. Except for that, we could overcome problems together.
As times go by, I encountered many kinds of things. It was easy to solve some things, meanwhile, it was not easy to solve many things.
If we endure for a long time, they are going to be solved well.
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Thank you for doing your composition. You did a great job. Keep it up. See you in our class.
Thank you for doing your composition. You did a great job. Keep it up. See you in our class.
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> When my children were sick, I couldn\'t do anything but to watch.
>> I wanted to exchange places with them.
Except for that, we could overcome problems together.
>> With the exception of those, we could overcome our problems together.
>> CORRECT
It was easy to solve some things, meanwhile, it was not easy to solve many things.
>> It was easy to solve some things but it isn\'t for others.
>> if we endure for a long time, they will be solved eventually.
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