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2021-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I have never lived near by the sights, so I don\'t know well, but I can understand their heart a little because I heard in the air. Tourists find to the sights from early morning till late at night. I remember tired to got up early morning,too, when I was my trip. They are there to watch, too. Tourists are fun, but people who live the places have a upset because of the noise they make. Did you have been annoyed experience because of tourists?

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Suzan! 
Yes, there are times I get annoyed to some tourists because they are so messy and noisy. 
Happy Friday! 

I have never lived near by the sights, so I don\'t know well, but I can understand their heart a little because I heard in the air.
>>> I don\'t know because I\'ve never lived close by, but I can understand their feelings a little because I heard it in the air.
Tourists find to the sights from early morning till late at night.
>>> Tourists visits the attractions from early morning to late night. 
I remember tired to got up early morning,too, when I was my trip.
>>> I remember being tired from waking up early when I went on a trip.
They are there to watch, too.
>>> They are also there to watch.
Tourists are fun, but people who live the places have a upset because of the noise they make.
>>> Having tourists is fun, but the people who live there are angry because of the noise they make.

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