Tradition value
학생이 쓴 원문
Every country has a tradition value. Tradition value mean the way of living and thought of the elder which the country lived in everywhere. I think that tradition value is not always right. Sometimes there are bored and slowly and currently don't fit in. But tradition value is very important for the maintenance and development of social. That is the power to maintain society. That must be transmit from generation to next generation.
But people, especially younger generation, have experienced from the rapid erosion of our tradition value in the process of industrialization. Maybe they forgotten and lost a tradition value. And so social ties are getting weaker. Our society must emphasize the good values of the traditional family and close fellowship. Such tradition values is a respect, courtesy, and trust. I think that is very important.
강사 첨삭
Hi there sir!
Traditions even family values are changing with the time. Modernization had brought this to us.Thank you for making your homework. See you on Wednesday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Every country has a tradition value.
>>Every country has a traditional value.
Tradition value mean the way of living and thought of the elder which the country lived in everywhere.
>> Valuable traditions mean the way of living and thought of the elders in the country they lived in.
I think that tradition value is not always right.
>> correct!
Sometimes there are bored and slowly and currently don\'t fit in.
>>Some are boring and slow and currently don\'t fit in.
But tradition value is very important for the maintenance and development of social.
>>But traditional value is very important for the maintenance and development of society.
That is the power to maintain society.
>> correct!
That must be transmit from generation to next generation.
>> That must be transmited from generation to next generation.But people, especially younger generation, have experienced from the rapid erosion of our tradition value in the process of industrialization.
>> correct!
Maybe they forgotten and lost a tradition value.
>> Maybe they have forgotten and lost the traditional values.
And so social ties are getting weaker.
>> correct!
Our society must emphasize the good values of the traditional family and close fellowship.
>> correct!
Such tradition values is a respect, courtesy, and trust. I think that is very important.
>> Such traditional values are respect, courtesy, and trust. I think those are very important.
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