Traditional Books

2022-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think traditional books are better than electronic books. Because, I think book have to made of paper. Also, for me, it is more familiar to read traditional books than electronic books.

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I think so too. 

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I think traditional books are better than electronic books. 
>> CORRECT

Because, I think book have to made of paper. 
>> It is because I books are made of paper. 

Also, for me, it is more familiar to read traditional books than electronic books.
>> Another reason is that I am more familiar in terms reading traditional books than electronic books. 

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