Traditional fairy tale(1)

2010-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

학생이 쓴 원문

Let me tell you Korean fairy tale ^&^ -Judgment of the rabbit- (1) Once upon a time, there was a tiger which fell into a hole. At that time a schalor came by. Tiger bagged him to drag it out the hole. The schalor felt sympathy, he saved the tiger. What next! The tiger eagered to swallow him. So the scahalor proposed to judgment by other ones. First they asked a cow who was right. The cow said that men forced to work them and ate them so tiger could eat him. How poor schalor!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!!!

I was wondering if you meant “scholar” on the fairy tale..

Anyway, this is an interesting story. I am curious to know what would be the judgment of the rabbit for the poor scholar.

Humans could be really cruel and mean sometimes but I believe that there is always a goodness in everyone..^^
See you in class!

Shy

Let me tell you Korean fairy tale ^&^

>> Let me tell you a Korean fairy tale ^&^
-Judgment of the rabbit- (1)

>> Correct
Once upon a time, there was a tiger which fell into a hole.

>> Correct
At that time a schalor came by.

>> At that time a scholar came by.

>> At that time a scholar passed by.
Tiger bagged him to drag it out the hole.

>> Tiger begged him to drag him out the hole.
The schalor felt sympathy, he saved the tiger.

>> The scholar felt sympathy, he saved the tiger.
What next! The tiger eagered to swallow him.

>> The next thing you know, the tiger is eager to swallow him!
So the scahalor proposed to judgment by other ones.

>> So the scholar proposed to get the judgment of the others.
First they asked a cow who was right. 

>> Correct
The cow said that men forced to work them and ate them so tiger could eat him.

>> The cow said that men forced them to work and ate them so the tiger could eat him.
How poor schalor!

>> Poor scholar!

 

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