Traditional fairy tale(1)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!!!
I was wondering if you meant “scholar” on the fairy tale..
Anyway, this is an interesting story. I am curious to know what would be the judgment of the rabbit for the poor scholar.
Humans could be really cruel and mean sometimes but I believe that there is
always a goodness in everyone..^^
See you in class!
Shy
Let me tell you Korean fairy tale ^&^
>> Let me tell you a Korean fairy tale ^&^
-Judgment of the rabbit- (1)
>> Correct
Once upon a time, there was a tiger which fell
into a hole.
>> Correct
At that time a schalor came by.
>> At that time a scholar came by.
>> At that time a scholar passed by.
Tiger bagged him to drag it out the hole.
>> Tiger begged him to drag him out the hole.
The schalor felt sympathy, he saved the tiger.
>>
The scholar felt sympathy, he saved the tiger.
What next! The tiger eagered to swallow him.
>> The next thing you know, the tiger is eager to swallow
him!
So the scahalor proposed to judgment by other
ones.
>> So the scholar proposed to get the judgment of the others.
First they asked a cow who was right.
>> Correct
The cow said that men forced to work them and ate
them so tiger could eat him.
>> The cow said that men forced them to work and ate them
so the tiger could eat him.
How poor schalor!
>> Poor scholar!
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