Traditional Korean Food
학생이 쓴 원문
I proud of \"Bulgoki\" the traditional food in my country.Because it doesn\'t spicy to foreigner.
The ingredients are beef, some vegetables,suger,and soysauce.
It tastes sweet and little salty. I like it!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!~
The ingredients are beef, some vegetables,suger,and soysauce.
It tastes sweet and little salty.
Thank you so much for sending a composition homework. ^^
I am looking forward to reading more!
You are right!
Bulgogi is very delicious. ^^
I will also be correcting your sentences here, okay?
You did well, buddy.
See you in class. ^^
~t. Ally
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I proud of \"Bulgoki\" the traditional food in my country.Because it doesn\'t spicy to foreigner.
>> I am proud of \"Bulgoki\". It is one of the traditional food in my country. I want foreigners to try it because it is not that spicy.
The ingredients are beef, some vegetables,suger,and soysauce.
>> The ingredients are: beef, some vegetables, sugar, and soy sauce.
It tastes sweet and little salty.
>> It tastes sweet, and a little salty.
I like it!
>> CORRECT!
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