Traditional medicines in my country.
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In my country traditional doctors perform acupuncture on patients body or cauterize the skin with moxa. Some people still love to be cured by those way, but I am scared of those medicine. Actually the popularity of traditional medicine is reducing since modern medicine spreads. However, the traditional medicine that is combined with modern medicine is easily found. They use modern technology like microwave or electronic skills with traditional way like acupuncture or cauterization.
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Hi [이름]. Thanks for sharing.
-T. Gabby :)
In my country traditional doctors perform acupuncture on patients body or cauterize the skin with moxa.
>> Correct.
Some people still love to be cured by those way, but I am scared of those medicine.
>> Some people still love to be cured by using those methods, but I am scared of those.
Actually the popularity of traditional medicine is reducing since modern medicine spreads.
>> Correct.
However, the traditional medicine that is combined with modern medicine is easily found.
>> Correct.
They use modern technology like microwave or electronic skills with traditional way like acupuncture or cauterization.
>> Correct.
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