Traditional ways of welcoming the New Year in my family.
학생이 쓴 원문
In case of my family, we useually eat Tteokguk, a traditional Korean dish. It’s main ingredient is sliced rice cake. After we eat Tteokguk my family go to grandparent’s house to do a good looking greeting. Then we spend our time watching movie or go to Catholic church to celebrate a mass about New Year since I am a Roman Catholic.
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Hi, Lune!
I just wanna wish you a Happy New Year! May it be filled with new adventures and good furtunes.
- Kristine ^^
In case of my family, we useually eat Tteokguk, a traditional Korean dish.
>> My family often enjoys the traditional Korean cuisine tteokguk.
It’s main ingredient is sliced rice cake.
>> Correct.
After we eat Tteokguk my family go to grandparent’s house to do a good looking greeting.
>> My family and I go to my grandparents\' house to exchange formal greetings after eating tteokguk.
Then we spend our time watching movie or go to Catholic church to celebrate a mass about New Year since I am a Roman Catholic.
>> We then celebrate the New Year by watching movies or attending mass at the Catholic church since I am a Roman Catholic.
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