Traffic accident.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I called your manager for the lesson at Power English.
I changed my lesson time to 5:40 today.
I had a few traffic accidents long time ago.
My accidents were due to motorcycles.
If I change the line on the road, the motorcycle hit my car. First time I tried to go into parking lot at my company, somebody hited my car. He was not hurt at that time. I called my insureance company to adopt this accident. But he went to the hospital after finishing that.
I heard this situation from insureance person later.
I thought he go to the hospital for getting money from the insureance.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]~ Thank you for doing your homework. As always, you\'re doing a great job. Keep up the good work. See you in class!
Here are your corrections:
I called your manager for the lesson at Power English.
>> I called your manager for our class at Power English.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> While I was changing my lane on the road, a motorcycle suddenly hit my car.
First time I tried to go into parking lot at my company, somebody hited my car.
>> The first time was when I tried parking my car at my company building, another car hit my car.
He was not hurt at that time.
>> CORRECT
I called my insureance company to adopt this accident.
>> I called my insurance company to deal with the accident.
But he went to the hospital after finishing that.
>> He then went to the hospital after finishing our talk.
>> I heard this situation from the insurance agent later.
>> I thought he went to the hospital to get money from the insurance.
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