Traffic and Transportation

2014-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning my teacher. I always appreciate your support of me. How can I ever thank you. I think my main problem when I write an english essay is about definite article. And because of your help, I can realize that my ability to write aneEnglish essay is improving ^^ Thank you again Today's dialogue is a conversation between a man and a woman. They are having a conversation in the car. While the man is driving recklessly, They are arguing intensively. The woman ask him to slow down the car speed or else she says she is going to drive instead him. Then the man get angry and ask her to stop being a backseat driver. And the intense debate is stopped after his promise that he will drive more carefully. I'm sure they will be late.

강사 첨삭

Great morning Mr. [Name]! :D

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about our discussion during the class.

And I am happy that you can see that you have improved already.
Of course you did improve!

The credit will still be given to you because you have worked for it.
I am just an instrument. ^^

Thank a lot for believing in me too.
I really appreciate it.

I am very sure that you are already in your way to achieving a good English skills.

More hard work and patience of course. :p)

See you again tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!

Thanks a lot!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Good morning my teacher.

>> correct!
I always appreciate your support of me.

>> I always appreciate your support to me.

How can I ever thank you.

>> How can I ever than you?
I think my main problem when I write an english essay is about definite article.

>> I think that the main problem when I am writing an English essay is the definite article.
And because of your help, I can realize that my ability to write aneEnglish essay is improving ^^

>> And because of your help, I was able to realize that my ability to write an English essay is improving ^^
Thank you again
>> correct! (proper punctuation)
Today\'s dialogue is a conversation between a man and a woman.

>> correct!
They are having a conversation in the car.

>> correct!
While the man is driving recklessly, They are arguing intensively.

>> While the man is driving recklessly, they are also arguing intensively.
The woman ask him to slow down the car speed or else she says she is going to drive instead him.

>> The woman asked him to slow down the car speed or else she is going to drive instead of him.

>> or: The woman asked him to slow down or else she is going to drive instead of him.

Then the man get angry and ask her to stop being a backseat driver.

>> correct!

And the intense debate is stopped after his promise that he will drive more carefully.

>> And the intense debate stopped after his promise that he will drive more carefully.
I\'m sure they will be late.

>> correct!

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