Traits that mature person has
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Mature person has different traists. I think mature person doesn’t make trouble easily. They think a lot before they say something, and try to put themselves in the other person’s place. It can make us experience different side. I think that’s why mature person is good at understanding other people.
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Mature person has different traists.
>> A mature person has different traits.
I think mature person doesn’t make trouble easily.
>> I think a mature person doesn\'t make trouble easily.
They think a lot before they say something and try to put themselves in the other person’s place.
>>CORRECT
It can make us experience different side.
>> They always see different sides.
I think that’s why mature person is good at understanding other people.
>> I think that\'s why they are good in understanding other people.
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