transfer
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s not the best way to transfering of the abusers in solving bullying problems.
They do even restart violenece and bullying in different school.
If they don\'t reflect truly, they don\'t stop the violence.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
On point! An opinion coming from you should be heard by many educators and I totally agree that transferring a studnet without any reflection is not the best solution.
Thank you for sharing your great thought :)
Aki~
It\'s not the best way to transfering of the abusers in solving bullying problems.
>>> It\'s not the best way to transfer the abusers in solving bullying problems.
They do even restart violenece and bullying in different school.
>>> They do even restart violence and bullying in a different school.
If they don\'t reflect truly, they don\'t stop the violence.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I there is no true reflection or remorse, violence will not stop.
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