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It rains on and off today. I arrived at my parent's house last night late because I had finished working late. My superior told me " Let's ride my car" So I rode my superior's car to Masan city. Our own way, there were many cars in the express way . We took a traffice jam in the express way. We spent in the way our time more than 1 hour than we expected. I changed his car to a express bus in Masan intercity bus terminal. I didn't have dinner at that time. I arrived over 9'o clock. So I was a little tired. I went to mind meditation academy and trained my mind for a hour. When I trained mind meditation today, I felt so sleepy. Thinking about it, That's why I arrived the hourse late transfering a few time.

Hello Nicky! Here you go, I have read the essay. Here are some grammar suggestions that will help you understand grammar more. Thanks for writing! Till next essay.   It rains on and off today. >>It rained on and off today.  I arrived at my parent's house last night late because I had finished working late. >>Correct. My superior told me " Let's ride my car" So I rode my superior's car to Masan city. >> My superior told me, " Let's ride my car." so I rode my superior's car to Masan City. Our own way, there were many cars in the express way . >> On our own way, there were many cars in the express way . We took a traffice jam in the express way. >> We met a traffice jam in the express way.  We spent in the way our time more than 1 hour than we expected. >> We spent more than 1 hour than we expected in the way.  I changed his car to a express bus in Masan intercity bus terminal. >> I took off from his car to an express bus in Masan Intercity Bus Terminal. I didn't have dinner at that time. >>Correct.  I arrived over 9'o clock. So I was a little tired. >> I arrived passed 9'o clock, so I was a little tired. I went to mind meditation academy and trained my mind for a hour. >> I went to the mind meditation academy and trained my mind for an hour. When I trained mind meditation today, I felt so sleepy. Thinking about it, That's why I arrived the hourse late transfering a few time. >> When I trained in the mind meditation today, I felt so sleepy thinking about it that's why I arrived thours late transfering sometime.