transport
학생이 쓴 원문
It,s much more convenient than before.
We can use all public transport with one transportation card.
Plus, we can transfer freely.
We don\'t have to carry cash because we use a card.
Free Wi-Fi is installed on the subway.
So it is quiet in the subway
Most people look at their phones or close like me.
I don\"t know whether it\"s a good thing or not.
We see more phones than we see each other
The convenience of civilization is a bit bitter.
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>> It\'s much more convenient than before.
We can use all public transport with one transportation card.
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So it is quiet in the subway
Most people look at their phones or close like me.
Most people look at their phones or close like me.
>> There is a free wifi installed in the subway so most of the people are quiet looking at their phones or waiting like me.
I don\"t know whether it\"s a good thing or not.
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>> We look at our phones more than we look at each other.
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