transport
학생이 쓴 원문
People can reduce traffic jams by using public transportation.
And environmental pollution can reduce also.
Parking always bothers me in the city.
But in my case, it`s uncomfortable when I go to the mart.
It`s too heavy to bring what I bought.
Especially after the shoulder starts to hurt, I take a car and shop for groceries.
I know I need to use public transportation more.
It`s not easy to practice
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for diligently doing your homework. You did great. Keep it up. See you later. T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> It can reduce environmental pollution also.
>> It is always bothersome to look for parking space in the city.
But in my case, it`s uncomfortable when I go to the mart.
>> It\'s uncomfortable whenever I go to the mart.
>> The things I bought are heavy.
>> Whenever my shoulder starts to hurt, I think it\'s best to take a car when shopping for groceries.
>> CORRECT
It`s not easy to practice.
>> CORRECT
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