Transportation
학생이 쓴 원문
I mainly use my car on my way to work.
In fact, it is practical to use public transportation because of the high cost of oil and maintenance. However, unfortunately there is no bus right from home to my company. If I use the bus, it takes 1 hour and half door-to-door, but when I use my car it takes about 20 to 30 minutes.
But these days, there are many cars on the road, so it takes about 50 minutes. In my opinion, because of the epidemic, many people use their own cars rather than public transportation.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This was a great essay although I need you to focus more on you sentence construction and usage of your punctuations marks. Keep up the good work. :)
-Teacher Elise
>> CORRECT
In fact, it is practical to use public transportation because of the high cost of oil and maintenance.
>> CORRECT
However, unfortunately there is no bus right from home to my company.
>>Unfortunately, there is no bus station from my house to my company.
If I use the bus, it takes 1 hour and half door-to-door, but when I use my car it takes about 20 to 30 minutes.
>>CORRECT
But these days, there are many cars on the road, so it takes about 50 minutes
>>CORRECT
In my opinion, because of the epidemic, many people use their own cars rather than public transportation.
>>CORRECT
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