Transportation

2021-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I don\'t want to ride motorcycle. I have never ridden it but it\'s scary just thinking about its speed. I don\'t know if I think it why that re[이름]d me of a motorcycle gang. maybe I don\'t try to ride it in my life. what transportation didn\'t you try to ride yet?

강사 첨삭

Good morning Ms. [Name]! Great to start the day, isn\'t it? Thank you for haring your thought about this. You know what? I like riding motorcycles, some of my male and female close friends used to give me a ride to go to work especially when I am going to be late. They are careful motorcycle drivers ^^ With your question, I haven\'\'t tried riding on a helicopter and I want to try because my friend has tried it when we were young. She was transported from a small town to my city during the Killer Earthquake in 1990
Aki~~
I don\'t want to ride motorcycle.
>>> I don\'t want to ride the motorcycle.
I have never ridden it but it\'s scary just thinking about its speed.
>>> I have never ridden it because it looks scary just thinking about its speed.
I don\'t know if I think it why that re[이름]d me of a motorcycle gang.
>>> I don\'t know but it re[이름]ds me of motorcycle gangs.
maybe I don\'t try to ride it in my life.
>>>  Maybe, I don\'t want to try riding on it in my life.
what transportation didn\'t you try to ride ye
>>> What transportation have you not ridden it yet?

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