Transportation
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I prefer riding public transportation. First, riding on public transportation such as subway or busses, we don\'t have severe traffic jam. When driving my car, I always get much stress because of heavy traffic jam. Secondly, public transportation makes us be punctual. Most busses have only bus lanes, they go smoothly to our destinations.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for spending time and effort in doing your homework. I know you are very busy so I really appreciate it! I agree! Sometimes, taking public transportation is less stressful because you don\'t have to deal with traffic jams.
-T. Caitlyn
I prefer riding public transportation.
>> CORRECT
First, riding on public transportation such as subway or busses, we don\'t have severe traffic jam.
>> First, when using public transportation like subways or buses, we avoid severe traffic jams.
When driving my car, I always get much stress because of heavy traffic jam.
>> When driving my car, I always get stressed because of heavy traffic jams
Secondly, public transportation makes us be punctual.
>> CORRECT
Most busses have only bus lanes, they go smoothly to our destinations.
>> Most buses have dedicated bus lanes, so they can travel smoothly to our destinations.
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