Transportation.

2010-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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There are many transportation these days. Bus,Metro,Taxi,Bicycle and my car. As for me, I like to take the bus to get to the distant place. I prefer it because it is very cheap. but I don't have many chance to take the bus. Since my company is very near my home, I walk to get there. and My neighborhood is so small that I just use bicycle to get somewhere. Riding a bicycle really helps me to keep my health. and It also help to protect the earth.

강사 첨삭

That's a good practice [이름]! Keep being health conscious.:) Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM-   There are many transportation these days.  Bus,Metro,Taxi,Bicycle and my car. >>>There are many modes of transportation these days...  Buses, Metros, taxis, bicycles, and of course, private vehicles. As for me, I like to take the bus to get to the distant place. >>>As for me, I like taking the bus to get to the distant places.I prefer it because it is very cheap.  >>>Correct^^ but I don't have many chance to take the bus. >>>Unfortunately, I don't have many chances to take the bus.Since my company is very near my home, I walk to get there. >>>Since my company is very near my house, I just walk to get there.and My neighborhood is so small that I just use bicycle to get somewhere.>>>Moreover, my neighborhood is so small that I just use my bicycle to get somewhere.Riding a bicycle really helps me to keep my health.  >>>Riding a bicycle really helps me maintain my health.  and It also help to protect the earth. >>>It also helps protect the earth.

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