Transportation.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many transportation these days.
Bus,Metro,Taxi,Bicycle and my car.
As for me, I like to take the bus to get to the distant place.
I prefer it because it is very cheap.
but I don't have many chance to take the bus.
Since my company is very near my home, I walk to get there.
and My neighborhood is so small that I just use bicycle to get
somewhere.
Riding a bicycle really helps me to keep my health.
and It also help to protect the earth.
강사 첨삭
That's a good practice [이름]! Keep being health conscious.:)
Here are your corrections:
-Teacher JM-
There are many transportation these days. Bus,Metro,Taxi,Bicycle and my car.
>>>There are many modes of transportation these days... Buses,
Metros, taxis, bicycles, and of course, private vehicles.
As for me, I like to take the bus to get to the distant place.
>>>As for me, I like taking the bus to get to the distant places.I prefer it because it is very cheap.
>>>Correct^^
but I don't have many chance to take the bus.
>>>Unfortunately, I don't have many chances to take the bus.Since my company is very near my home, I walk to get there.
>>>Since my company is very near my house, I just walk to get there.and My neighborhood is so small that I just use bicycle to get somewhere.>>>Moreover, my neighborhood is so small that I just use my bicycle to get somewhere.Riding a bicycle really helps me to keep my health.
>>>Riding a bicycle really helps me maintain my health.
and It also help to protect the earth.
>>>It also helps protect the earth.
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