Transportation.

2010-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 janel

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I prefer taking the bus. Since I don't have a car, Taking the bus is the best way to go somewhere. It is cheap and efficient. and It is also better for the environment. When I go to a nearby place, I like to use a bicycle. Since I was young, It has been most convenient transportation for me. It also help me to keep in good health.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for preparing for the next topic. I hope you get to read this before our class starts.^^

-Teacher JM-

I prefer taking the bus.

>>>Correct^^
Since I don't have a car,Taking the bus is the best way to go somewhere.

>>>Since I don't have a car, taking the bus is the best way to go somewhere.

It is cheap and efficient.

>>>Correct^^
and It is also better for the environment.

>>>It is also better for the environment.
When I go to a nearby place, I like to use a bicycle.

>>>Whenever I go to a nearby place, I like using a bicycle.
Since I was young, It has been most convenient transportation for me.

>>>Since I was young, It has been the most convenient transportation for me.
It also help me to keep in good health.

>>>It also helps me keep a good health.

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