transportation 3,4,5,6
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Amazing Cherry, thank you for this. :)
3. I usually use the bus because there are so many buses in my area and it is comfortable.
>> Correct.
I have tried riding the subway in Seoul that is not exist in my area, but it was really convenient than the bus.
>> I have tried riding the subway in Seoul, it really more convenient than the bus. We don\'t have it in our area though.
So I think the subway is faster and the most comfortable when I move to where.
>> That is why I think that the subway is much more comfortable and convenient.
4. I think the subway and train are the common means of transport in my country.
>> Correct.
This is because subway is the most convenient when moving in one city and train is the most convenient when moving to other city.
>> I still think that the train and subway are the most convenient transportation when moving to another city.
I always use the train, ktx, when I go to the Seoul.
>> I always use the train or the KTX, when I go to Seoul.
5. My city is not a big city like Seoul, it is just small city so there are no often traffic jams.
>> 5. My city is not a big city like Seoul. It is just small city so there are no traffic jams often.
However, when rush hour, because of traffic jam we can move very slowly.
>> However, during the rush hour, because of the traffic jam, we can move very slowly.
Specially if there was an accident we can\'t move as well.
>> Especially if there is an accident we can\'t move as well.
6. Time problem is the biggest change in transportation.
>> Duration of the trip may be the biggest problem in transportations.
Because from Ulsan to Seoul it takes about 5 hours by bus or car.
>>It is because , from Ulsan to Seoul, it takes about 5 hours by bus or car.
However, after train like ktx is developed we can go about 2 hours and half.
>>However, after the train like the KTX was developed, we can travel for about 2 and a half hours.
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