transportation 3,4,5,6

2019-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Oneil

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3. I usually use the bus because there are so many buses in my area and it is comfortable. I have tried riding the subway in Seoul that is not exist in my area, but it was really convenient than the bus. So I think the subway is faster and the most comfortable when I move to where. 4. I think the subway and train are the common means of transport in my country. This is because subway is the most convenient when moving in one city and train is the most convenient when moving to other city. I always use the train, ktx, when I go to the Seoul. 5. My city is not a big city like Seoul, it is just small city so there are no often traffic jams. However, when rush hour, because of traffic jam we can move very slowly. Specially if there was an accident we can\'t move as well. 6. Time problem is the biggest change in transportation. Because from Ulsan to Seoul it takes about 5 hours by bus or car. However, after train like ktx is developed we can go about 2 hours and half.

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Amazing Cherry, thank you for this. :)



3. I usually use the bus because there are so many buses in my area and it is comfortable.

>> Correct.


 I have tried riding the subway in Seoul that is not exist in my area, but it was really convenient than the bus.

>>  I have tried riding the subway in Seoul, it really more convenient than the bus. We don\'t have it in our area though.


So I think the subway is faster and the most comfortable when I move to where.

>> That is why I think that the subway is much more comfortable and convenient.



 4. I think the subway and train are the common means of transport in my country.

>> Correct.


 This is because subway is the most convenient when moving in one city and train is the most convenient when moving to other city.

>> I still think that the train and subway are the most convenient transportation when  moving to another city.


 I always use the train, ktx, when I go to the Seoul. 

>>  I always use the train or the KTX, when I go to Seoul. 



 5. My city is not a big city like Seoul, it is just small city so there are no often traffic jams.

>>  5. My city is not a big city like Seoul. It is just small city so there are no traffic jams often. 


However, when rush hour, because of traffic jam we can move very slowly.

>> However, during the rush hour, because of the traffic jam, we can move very slowly.


Specially if there was an accident we can\'t move as well.

>> Especially if there is an accident we can\'t move as well.


 6. Time problem is the biggest change in transportation.

>> Duration of the trip may be the biggest problem in transportations.


Because from Ulsan to Seoul it takes about 5 hours by bus or car.

>>It is because , from Ulsan to Seoul, it takes about 5 hours by bus or car.


However, after train like ktx is developed we can go about 2 hours and half.

>>However, after the train like the KTX was developed, we can travel for about 2 and a half hours.


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