Transportation.

2010-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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I used to like taking the bus. Because It was very cheap and efficient. and There wasn't subway in my neighborhood. So I only could take either bus or taxi. But I bought my own car last month. So I prefer using my own car. It is expensive to have my own car because gas is so expensive these days. but It is convenient to use my car. because I don't have to wait and I can use it anytime even if It is over midnight.

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Hello there my dear [이름], I’m so happy to hear that it was just last month when you bought your new car..I hope I can also buy one, kkkk... Anyway, I’m so happy to say that your writing skill is very impressive! I can't see much corrections in your composition so watching American sitcoms and movies is actually a very good help because it doesn’t only help you develop your word power but at the same time, you can also inculcate some new expressions, which is very useful in your future career!;0) Continue what you’re doing my dear [이름], and everything will fall into places...I’m so proud of you! I used to like taking the bus. >>correctBecause It was very cheap and efficient. >>correctand there wasn't subway in my neighborhood. >>correctSo I only could take either bus or taxi. >>correct>>So I could only take either bus or taxi- betterBut I bought my own car last month. >>correctSo I prefer using my own car. >>correctIt is expensive to have my own car because gas is so expensive these days. >>correctbut It is convenient to use my car. >>correctbecause I don't have to wait and I can use it anytime even if It is over midnight. >>correct  

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