Transportation and accommodation
학생이 쓴 원문
Choosing an apartment as our accommodation rather than a hotel was helpful to save money. The rate was lower than that of hotel, and we could cook our meal. With our accommodation, the cheap public transportation fare also saved our budget. The bus fare for going to old town was just 2RM, which was less than 1000 won.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
I really admire how you were able to fit all your expenses within your budget and still have extra money at the end of your trip. It’s nice that you considered and planned your accommodation to fit your budget. Traveling this way makes it less of a burden when it comes to budgeting.
- T. Caitlyn
Choosing an apartment as our accommodation rather than a hotel was helpful to save money.
>> CORRECT
The rate was lower than that of hotel, and we could cook our meal.
>> The rate was lower than that of a hotel, and we could cook our meals.
With our accommodation, the cheap public transportation fare also saved our budget.
>> In addition, cheap public transportation fares also helped us save money.
The bus fare for going to old town was just 2RM, which was less than 1000 won.
>> The bus fare to the old town was just 2 RM, which was less than 1,000 won.
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