Transportation to prefer when I travel
학생이 쓴 원문
When I travel in Korea, I prefer to subway or taxi.
Because they transfer people where they want to go.
I had never traveled to abroad.
But If I can travel to abroad, I will prefer to use a car.
Because maybe I think using a car is to be safe money and move efficiently.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna. I appreciate for taking your time in making your composition. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you in class.~ T. Lyn
When I travel in Korea, I prefer to subway or taxi.
>>I prefer the subway or taxi when traaveling in Korea.
Because they transfer people where they want to go.
Because they transfer people where they want to go.
>>It is because the move people to where they want to go.
I had never traveled to abroad.
I had never traveled to abroad.
>>I had never been in an overseas trip.
But If I can travel to abroad, I will prefer to use a car.
But If I can travel to abroad, I will prefer to use a car.
>>However, if I can travel abroad, I\'d prefer to use a car.
Because maybe I think using a car is to be safe money and move efficiently.
Because maybe I think using a car is to be safe money and move efficiently.
>>I think it is because using a car can make me save more money and efficient to travel.
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