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2012-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Carly

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sorry for not in class today. I slept in very cold air because my house was old over 20years, and too mush cold weather. homework: I hope to travel in Paris and Assisi. Paris is art city in France and Assisi is religious art city retain the shape medieval building. I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel city like monastery. I have a fantasy about euro. Maybe this fantasy would be grown by movie background is euro. the mood of euro is relex and calm but atmosphere of freedom. If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would be my feeling? Sometimes I look for pictures about them, and imagin. see you tomorrow,ma'am.

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Hi! Happy Tuesday! Thank you for writing and letting me know why you didn\'t attend your class. -T. Faye- sorry for not in class today. >>Sorry for not attending our class today. I slept in very cold air because my house was old over 20years, and too mush cold weather.>>I slept in a very cold place. My house is old it\'s over 20 years now. The weather is too cold. homework: >>Homewrork: I hope to travel in Paris and Assisi. >>CORRECT Paris is art city in France and Assisi is religious art city retain the shape medieval building.>>Paris is the art city of France and Assisi is the religious art city. It retained the shape of medieval building.I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel city like monastery.>>I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel the city like monastery.I have a fantasy about euro.>>I have a fantasy about Europe. Maybe this fantasy would be grown by movie background is euro. >>Maybe this fantasy will be satisfied by watching movies with Europe\'s background. the mood of euro is relex and calm but atmosphere of freedom.>>The mood in Europe is relaxing and calm and the atmosphere is like freedom. If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would be my feeling? >>CORRECT OR: >>If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would I feel? Sometimes I look for pictures about them, and imagin. >>Sometimes I look for pictures oft them and imagine. see you tomorrow,ma\'am. >>See you tomorrow Ma\'am!

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