travel
학생이 쓴 원문
sorry for not in class today.
I slept in very cold air because my house was old over 20years, and too mush cold weather.
homework:
I hope to travel in Paris and Assisi.
Paris is art city in France and Assisi is religious art city retain the shape medieval building.
I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel city like monastery.
I have a fantasy about euro.
Maybe this fantasy would be grown by movie background is euro.
the mood of euro is relex and calm but atmosphere of freedom.
If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would be my feeling?
Sometimes I look for pictures about them, and imagin.
see you tomorrow,ma'am.
강사 첨삭
Hi! Happy Tuesday!
Thank you for writing and letting me know why you didn\'t attend your class.
-T. Faye-
sorry for not in class today.
>>Sorry for not attending our class today.
I slept in very cold air because my house was old over 20years, and too mush cold weather.>>I slept in a very cold place. My house is old it\'s over 20 years now. The weather is too cold.
homework:
>>Homewrork:
I hope to travel in Paris and Assisi.
>>CORRECT
Paris is art city in France and Assisi is religious art city retain the shape medieval building.>>Paris is the art city of France and Assisi is the religious art city. It retained the shape of medieval building.I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel city like monastery.>>I want to watch a traditional art of france and feel the parisian, and watch where St.Francisco lived and feel the city like monastery.I have a fantasy about euro.>>I have a fantasy about Europe.
Maybe this fantasy would be grown by movie background is euro.
>>Maybe this fantasy will be satisfied by watching movies with Europe\'s background.
the mood of euro is relex and calm but atmosphere of freedom.>>The mood in Europe is relaxing and calm and the atmosphere is like freedom.
If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would be my feeling?
>>CORRECT OR:
>>If I actually go to Paris and Assisi, how would I feel?
Sometimes I look for pictures about them, and imagin.
>>Sometimes I look for pictures oft them and imagine.
see you tomorrow,ma\'am.
>>See you tomorrow Ma\'am!
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