Travel
학생이 쓴 원문
1.What outdoor activity do you like and why?
I walk and walk in the forest. I like a fresh aire, a smell of woods, a sound of birds and flowing of streem. So I love JEJU island. Many beutiful paths through the woods are in Jeju.
2. Is it fine for you to travel to other countries using a boat? Why or why not?
I don\'t like to travel using a boat because I always have a severe seasickness.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. alice!
~Lucy
I walk and walk in the forest.
>>CORRECT!
I like a fresh aire, a smell of woods, a sound of birds and flowing of streem.
>> I like fresh air, smell of woods, sound of birds and flowing stream.
So I love JEJU island.
>>CORRECT!
Many beutiful paths through the woods are in Jeju.>>CORRECT!
I don\'t like to travel using a boat because I always have a severe seasickness.>>CORRECT!
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