Travel
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I will go to a place with few
people.
Because I don\'t think I
can feel that a place with too
many people is complicated and
healing.
l want to go to a quiet
place and feel relaxed.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia, thank you for completing your homework. Keep up the good work!
I hope these revisions are helpful.
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara
>>> I prefer to go to a place with few people rather than a crowded place.
Because I don\'t think I can feel that a place with too many people is complicated and healing.
Because I don\'t think I can feel that a place with too many people is complicated and healing.
>>> Because I don\'t think being in a place with too many people will make me feel relaxed and healing; it tends to be overwhelming.
l want to go to a quiet place and feel relaxed.
l want to go to a quiet place and feel relaxed.
>>> CORRECT!
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