travel
학생이 쓴 원문
I bring my phone,
charger, clothes, passport, and toothbrush.
I also bring some snacks and a camera.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Isla^^
Thank you for sharing.
You must love taking pictures.
_T. SHAY^^
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I bring my phone,charger, clothes, passport, and toothbrush.
>>Correct
OR: When I go on a trip I usually bring my phone, charger, clothes, passport, and toothbrush.
I also bring some snacks and a camera.
>>Correct
OR: I also pack some snacks and a camera.
Thank you for sharing.
You must love taking pictures.
_T. SHAY^^
***
I bring my phone,charger, clothes, passport, and toothbrush.
>>Correct
OR: When I go on a trip I usually bring my phone, charger, clothes, passport, and toothbrush.
I also bring some snacks and a camera.
>>Correct
OR: I also pack some snacks and a camera.
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