Travel
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Jay,
I know you will have an exciting and amazing learning experience on your working holiday to Australia. Have fun!(\",)
~Lynn
When we travel to other countries, there must be both fear and expectation for that.
>> correct!
Both fear and expectation are about something derived from going to where you haven\'t experienced.
>> Both fear and expectation are derived from going to where you haven\'t experienced.
Traveling to other countries could be good memories and also it could be dangerous.
>> Traveling to other countries could bring good memories but it could also be dangerous.
I could meet many people who have different thoughts and it is possible to exchange each other\'s thoughts.
>> correct!
I\'m supposed to go to Australia and I hope I will be able to meet many people and improve my English skills.
>> correct!
However, I\'m afraid of several things. I\'ve heard that I need to be careful about aborigines.
>> correct!
And, there are few people in where I am supposed to go to.
>> And there are few places where I\'m suppose to visit.
I\'m a little bit anxious but expectation for traveling is bigger than fear.
>> I\'m a little bit anxious but I\'m more excited than afraid.
I hope it will be safe and wonderful working holiday travel to me.
>> I hope it will be safe and wonderful working holiday travel for me.
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