Travel back in time
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could travel back in time, I would go to in 2022.
Because, I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at the time.
Also, that was the most fun time in school.
My friends were good and fun.
And I enjoyed to play because the next year, I was in the middle school.
Therefore, I want to go back in 2022.
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Hi, [이름]. Well done on accomplishing your homework. Here are some corrections for clarification of the thoughts and grammar.
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If I could travel back in time, I would go to in 2022.
>>> If I could travel back in time, I would go back to 2022
Because, I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at the time.
Because, I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at the time.
>>> because I was in the sixth grade of elementary school at that time.
Also, that was the most fun time in school.
Also, that was the most fun time in school.
>>> It was the most fun time in school for me.
My friends were good and fun.
My friends were good and fun.
>>> My friends were good and fun,
And I enjoyed to play because the next year, I was in the middle school.
And I enjoyed to play because the next year, I was in the middle school.
>>> and I enjoyed playing because the next year, I entered middle school.
Therefore, I want to go back in 2022.
Therefore, I want to go back in 2022.
>>> CORRECT!!
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