Travel is Two edged of sword!
학생이 쓴 원문
I enjoy traveling to distant places.
I travel the more distant places, getting the more experiences and realizations.
Although traveling distant places is so hard, I think I can get a lot of things.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenna! Like here, I really love to travel. If only I had more time and money to travel. Soon, we will be traveling wherever we want. I\'ll see you in class. Stay warm! ~ T. Lyn
I enjoy traveling to distant places.
>>Correct. I enjoy traveling to faraway places.
I travel the more distant places, getting the more experiences and realizations.
I travel the more distant places, getting the more experiences and realizations.
>>Travel farther and gain more experience and enlightenment.
Although traveling distant places is so hard, I think I can get a lot of things.
Although traveling distant places is so hard, I think I can get a lot of things.
>>Although, traveling far away is so hard, but I feel like I can get a lot out of it.
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