travel sketch

2014-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hi, Kathrine! This is my travel sketches. This travel was so interested with my family. Following is the place that we went. 1. The Character world: My children were so happy in here. We could see the cartoon character and doll of the world and Korean past character. 2. believe it or not muzium My children were so happy in here, too. We could see the amazing and suprising fact or unfact. 3. Man-Jang Lava Caves 4. Seong-San sunrise peak(Seongsan ilchulbong) 5. Jeju prehistoric ruins 6. Black sand beach The Jeju island is a famous vacationland and it needs a many time in order to explore all the places in Jeju. Unfortunately, I couldn't see the baek-lok Lake in Han-La Mauntain until now. The lake is located on the peak of Mountain. So it takes a lot of time and the access is controlled sometimes because the weather became worse. You can see a lot of information of the Jehu island through the internet. I hope that you can tour there, if so I can guide for free for you. HAHAHA!

강사 첨삭

Great evening to you Mr. [이름]!

Well, I am glad that your family had a safe and enjoyable trip to Jeju during the holiday.

And thank you for sharing to me your itinerary.

And thank you also for offering to be my tour guide for free.
I will remember that.

Do not worry because I will really contact you if I will go for a travel to Jeju. kkkk

You will let me stay to your future villa for free. Isn\'t it? hahaha

Thanks a bunch!!

See you again tomorrow!

Have a great night!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Hi, Kathrine!

>> correct!
This is my travel sketches.

>> correct!

>> or: This is my travel itinerary.
This travel was so interested with my family.

>> This travel was so interesting for my family.
Following is the place that we went.

>> The following are the places we have been to.
1. The Character world:

>> correct!
My children were so happy in here.

>> My children were so happy to be here.
We could see the cartoon character and doll of the world and Korean past character.

>> We could see some cartoon characters and famous dolls around the world and the Korean characters in the past.
2. believe it or not muzium

>> Believe it or not Museum.
My children were so happy in here, too.

>> My children were so happy to be here too.
We could see the amazing and suprising fact or unfact.

>> We couls see some amazing and surprising scientific facts.
3. Man-Jang Lava Caves

>> correct!
4. Seong-San sunrise peak(Seongsan ilchulbong)

>> correct!
5. Jeju prehistoric ruins

>> correct!
6. Black sand beach
>> correct!
The Jeju island is a famous vacationland and it needs a many time in order to explore all the places in Jeju.

>> Jeju island is a famous place for vacation and it needs a lot of time to explore all the places in Jeju.
Unfortunately, I couldn\'t see the baek-lok Lake in Han-La Mauntain until now.
>> correct!
The lake is located on the peak of Mountain.

>> The lake is located on the peak of the mountain.
So it takes a lot of time and the access is controlled sometimes because the weather became worse.
>> So it takes a lot of time and the road access is sometimes controlled because the weather became worse.
You can see a lot of information of the Jehu island through the internet.

>> correct! (Jeju)
I hope that you can tour there, if so I can guide for free for you.
>> I hope that you can have a tour there, and if that happens, I can be your guide for free.
HAHAHA!

>> correct!

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