Travel to tokyo
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Hi [이름]!!!
Hope you enjoy your time in Tokyo. I can feel that you are very excited about it!!
“Travel brings power and love back into your life.”
― Jalaluddin Rumi
~Teacher Megan~
Me and my wife are going to travel Tokyo 2 weeks later.
>> Me and my wife will be travelling to Tokyo 2 weeks later.
My wife is so excited while she is planning where to go.
>> Correct.
she like to go trendy cafe and store, and she take the photo which will be posted on her Instagram.
>> She likes to visit trendy cafes and stores, and she loves taking photos that she will post on her Instagram.
I\'m actually love to visit historical place and landmark, however, I\'ll match following her traveling style since she have been to travel abroad just fewer times than me.
>> I actually love to visit historical places and landmarks, however, I have to give in to her traveling style since she had travelled abroad just for a few times compared to me.
Tokyo has either a number of fancy store and tasty restaurant I can\'t imagine. it\'s kind of heaven for blogger who is good at traveling.
>> Tokyo has a number of fancy stores and tasty restaurants I can\'t imagine. It\'s a heaven for bloggers who are good at traveling.
it\'s difficult to choose where we go as we took all day to search great spot in the internet.
>> it\'s difficult to choose the places to visit , as it took us the whole day to search great spots in the internet.
the only thing we agreed with is to visit Art galleries which are famous for contemporary art. Both of them like seeing masterpieces.
>> the only thing we agreed upon is to visit Art galleries which are famous for contemporary art. Both of us like seeing masterpieces.
it also will relieve my fatigue from shopping for a long time. I don\'t know where we go before we depart, but our travel would be fantastic.
>> It will also relieve my fatigue from shopping for a long time. I don\'t know where we will go before we depart, but I believe our travel would be fantastic.
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