Traveling!
학생이 쓴 원문
The good thing about traveling is that you can experience new things that you have never experienced before, and that you can rest your tired body and mind. The downside of travel is that it can be stressful and tiring due to the awkwardness conveyed by new experiences.
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~~ Teacher Sharon
The good thing about traveling is that you can experience new things that you have never experienced before, and that you can rest your tired body and mind.
>> Some good things about traveling are that you can experience new things that you have never experienced before, and that you can rest your tired body and mind.
The downside of travel is that it can be stressful and tiring due to the awkwardness conveyed by new experiences.
>> Correct
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