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I have a memorable trip with my boyfreind in Jeju island. We went there for our summer vacation few days ago. He and I already visited there several times but It was first time to go there together. So we were excited and looking forward to go there. When we have time, we usually go to trip. However, It used to be for 1 night 2 days. The island is quite big to go evertwhere for one day so this time we planed for 3days. we could have a lot of times together. As soon as we arrived in the island, we ate ear shells. After have lunch, we followed a trail which is in front of the sea. the traill was so pretty but the weather was too scorching to keep walking arond. And we went some cafe which appeared in the movie. the movie topic is about 'the first love', we watched it in a theater. The cafe is smaller than I thought but it was lovely ,cozy and warm. the weather seems like killing me, so we used to be exhausted after lunch. it was really scorching but it was good to take a pictures.

Hi there!! Wow! Such a wonderful trip!!! (^_^) I envy you, I hope I can visit Jeju island as well. I feel like I went there too because you vividly described and explained what you saw. Thanks my dear!! See you ♡♤ Teacher Kelly Here are my corrections: I have a memorable trip with my boyfreind in Jeju island. >>Correct :)   (spelling check- boyfriend)We went there for our summer vacation few days ago. >>Correct :)He and I already visited there several times but It was first time to go there together. >>He and I already visited there several times but it was the  first time that we go there together.So we were excited and looking forward to go there. >>So we were excited and we\'re looking forward to go there.When we have time, we usually go to trip. >>When we have time, we usually go for a  trip.However, It used to be for 1 night 2 days. >>However, it used to be for one night and two days.The island is quite big to go evertwhere for one day so this time we planed for 3days. >>Correct  (spelling check- everywhere/planned) ^-^we could have a lot of times together. >>So we could have more time together.As soon as we arrived in the island, we ate ear shells. >> Correct :)After have lunch, we followed a trail which is in front of the sea. >> Correct :)the traill was so pretty but the weather was too scorching to keep walking arond. >> Correct :)    (capitalization- The)And we went some cafe which appeared in the movie. >>And we went to a cafe/ cafeteria which appeared in a movie. >>And we went to a coffee shop which appeared in a movie.the movie topic is about \'the first love\', we watched it in a theater.>>Correct :)    (capitalization- The) The cafe is smaller than I thought but it was lovely ,cozy and warm.>>Correct the weather seems like killing me, so we used to be exhausted after lunch.>>The weather seems like killing me, so we were so exhausted after lunch. it was really scorching but it was good to take a pictures. >>Correct     (Capitalization- It)