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Hi [이름]!It's so nice to see that you're sharing your future plans with me and I really appreciate that. Whatever your decision is,just make sure that you will stand for it and you will enjoy every minute of your stay.Take care always.
In May, I have a vacation for 6days.
>>On May, I will have 6 days vacation.
I talked with my rommate about what I will do during the vacaion.
>>I talked to my roommate about what will I do during the vaction.
It is traveling that I like to do most.
>>Correct!
If I can, I want to travel Europe but Europe is very far conturies.
>>If I can, I want to travel to Europe but it's too far.
>>If I can, I want to travel to Europe but it's a very far country.
Maybe I can't enjoy the culture and waste my money.
>>Maybe I will not enjoy the culture and I will just waste my money.
Next, my rommate recommended Japan.
>>Then my roommate recommended Japan.
But thes days there are many problems in the contury.
>>But these days,Japan is suffering from a lot of problems.
>>BUt these days Japan is encountering alot of problems.
I'm still thinking about my plan.
>>Correct!
Thank you for corrections!!^^*
>>Thank you for your corrections!
>>Thank you for correcting my compositions!
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