Traveling alone
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I like to travel alone because I have more freedom than traveling with someone. Actually I have traveled alone several times. I have been in New Zealand even for one month. Traveling or staying abroad alone, I could focus on only myself. I didn\'t need to take care of my family or other friends. I could go as I would like to, eat what I want to, and go to bed or wake up as I planned. And without company I could make friends with foreigners.
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I like to travel alone because I have more freedom than traveling with someone.
>> CORRECT! Actually I have traveled alone several times.
>> CORRECT! I have been in New Zealand even for one month.
>> I have been to New Zealand even for one month.
OR >> I have been to New Zealand and stayed there for a month.
Traveling or staying abroad alone, I could focus on only myself.
>> Traveling or staying abroad alone, I could focus only on myself.
I didn\'t need to take care of my family or other friends.
>> CORRECT! I could go as I would like to, eat what I want to, and go to bed or wake up as I planned.
>> CORRECT! And without company I could make friends with foreigners.
>> CORRECT!
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