Traveling alone
학생이 쓴 원문
The advantage of traveling: First, I am free to go and travel. I am always free. Second, I don\'t need to take care of anyone. With family or friends, I always care for them habitually. Traveling alone, I can focus on myself. Lastly, while traveling alone, it is easier to make friends with local people or foreigners.
The disadvantage:First, some places are dangerous to travel alone such as mountains or night open markets. Second, sometimes I feel lonely. Being alone, I\'m more likely to miss my family and friends. Last, if I got sick, I would have difficulty in dealing with my situation.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I share the same opinion as you: Traveling alone can be both fun and freeing because you don\'t have to worry about others, but it can also be lonely. It may also depend on your purpose; if your goal is self-reflection, then traveling alone can be very helpful.
-T. Caitlyn
The advantage of traveling:
>> CORRECT
First, I am free to go and travel.
>> CORRECT
I am always free.
>> CORRECT
Second, I don\'t need to take care of anyone.
>> CORRECT
With family or friends, I always care for them habitually.
>> I always habitually care for my family and friends.
Traveling alone, I can focus on myself.
>> CORRECT
Lastly, while traveling alone, it is easier to make friends with local people or foreigners.
>> CORRECT
The disadvantage:
The disadvantage:
>> CORRECT
First, some places are dangerous to travel alone such as mountains or night open markets.
>> First, some places are dangerous to travel alone, such as mountains or open markets at night.
Second, sometimes I feel lonely.
>> CORRECT
Being alone, I\'m more likely to miss my family and friends.
>> CORRECT
Last, if I got sick, I would have difficulty in dealing with my situation.
>> Lastly, if I get sick, I may have difficulty dealing with the situation.
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