Traveling is great

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I\'m going to travel Easten Europe in July soon especially Czeck, Ostria and Hungary.

>>I\'m going to travel to Eastern Europe in July soon. I will go to Czech, Austria and Hungary.

It\'s just my vacation and i need to be relaxed and put myself together because i\'m having hard time that i have no idea what is my job, goal and dream and recently i broke up with my ex-boyfriend.

>>It\'s just a vacation. I need to relax and put myself together, because I\'m having a hard time thinking about my job, goal and dream. Recently I broke with my boyfriend.

 I wanted to run away somewhere, anywhere far away and relieve stress so i decided it.

>>I decided to travel, because I wanted to go somewhere, anywhere and far away to relieve my stress.

 But why i choose to travel is that i\'ve never gone there as well and want to get out of my set life and also these days a lot of Korean TV program show journey with thier family and friends.

>>Why I choose to travel is that I\'ve never gone to that place before and I want to get out to set my life. These days, there are a lot of Korean TV programs that show the journey of some people.

Now Korean life style is changing and they know what is important in their life and how living will better.

>>Now, the lifestyle of Koreans is changing and they know what is important in their lives and how they will make it better.

However some people think that travel is luxury but i think it\'s not.

>>However, some people think that travelling is a luxury, but I think it\'s not.

We have different style of hobby and life.

>>CORRECT

Anybody don\'t need to bother me and do not live instead of me.

>>DID YOU MEAN: No one can bother me.

And now journey is an important part of my life and many people prefer going out to trip.

>>And now, journey is an important part of my life and many people prefer to go out for a trip.

Travel over the world is great adventure and i\'will continue.

>>Travelling all over the world is a great adventure and I will continue to do so.